Five Questions on Indie Publishing with Leon Shure

LeonbabypictureLeon Shure has graciously agreed to share his experiences with indie publishing with me. This is Leon circa the early years. I met him at a conference a few years back where we suffered the slings and arrows of agents together. By then he was a full-grown adult, but neither of us escaped unscathed.

I see in your Smashwords profile that you’ve been very prolific at indie publishing, can you share your thoughts on the hardest and easiest part of indie publishing your e-books?

I’ve been self-publishing since September 2010, about two years and a quarter ago, and have six mysteries and two books of puns for sale at all the e-book stores.

I’m prolific because I’ve given myself permission to write.  I’m a big believer in learning by doing.  I am an imperfectionist.  If I waited for my books to be perfect, I’d never publish.  The ability to write evolves.  Each book is better than the last.  Because I can make mistakes, I can write a lot.  If I’ve written something really dumb, I know I’ll catch it in the second draft.  Also, I know that no matter how I try, I will never catch all the grammatical errors.  I do my best with spell-checkers in the word processing programs.  I spend a lot of time unscrambling my sentences so that they don’t draw attention when I don’t want them to stop the reader in his tracks.  I believe the reader would rather read something authentic than scrubbed.

I think most writers go through an initial period where their work is awful and should never see the light of day.  Then one day, it just seems that your writing is good enough.  I started to publish the day after I realized that my work was ready for public inspection.

Did you format the e-books yourself or hire a company to help you? If you did it yourself, how hard was it to do? Any tips you’d pass along?

Self-publishing isn’t hard and, above all, it is not expensive.  If you can bear to do your own formatting and editing, it’s free.  My only cost of publishing is the money I pay to get a decent cover.

My advice on self-publishing is not to allow yourself to be overwhelmed by the technical requirements.  I’ve been using Smashwords (www.smashwords.com) and, if you follow the clearly written directions on the website, you can format your own work.  If it turns out that your book has some internal formatting problems that can’t pass the “meatgrinder,” you can always use the “nuclear option” of copying your book into Notepad to remove all formatting and to begin over.  The hardest part is doing the formatting the first time.  After that, you can copy your latest novel into the format you created, then delete the previous book from that.  Then it’s only a matter of putting the correct number of spaces between chapters.

If you need help in formatting, many people can be found on the internet to help you.  Besides Smashwords, there are many other “aggregators” on the net, which will distribute your books to the various e-book stores in the correct file type.

I want to say a few words about the marvelous program, Scrivener.  This cheap, $45 program makes organizing a novel much easier and allows you to keep track of your characters and plotting.  It is possible, although I haven’t tried it yet, to format from Scrivener directly into the file type used by Amazon.

Your covers are very eye-catching, did you hire someone to design them or did you create them on your own?

Many artists are available on the internet to create a decent cover, and some will charge $50 or less.  I was lucky enough to have a personal friend, Gabi Ladowski (www.gabiladowsk.com ), who will make me a cover for $100.  When I’m three-quarters through a second draft, I send him an e-mail with the plot and describe several of the most dramatic scenes in the mystery.  He sends me a few sample covers, and there always seems to be one that is best.

Just like there is no perfect novel and no perfect blurb, etc., there is no perfect cover.  One of the great things about self-publishing is you can go back after awhile, and redo the cover, if it isn’t working for you.  When it turns out that I’m writing a series, I like to go back and have covers that look somewhat similar in theme.

What sort of marketing plan did you use to get the word out about your books? What do you wish you’d done differently/what worked out better than you expected?

I have never advertised and I’m selling books.

The common advice to create a platform is true.  If you can do a blog, great.  I personally don’t have anything interesting to say each day or even each month.  I used my Twitter account to write puns, then published my tweets.  I now have two books of puns for free on Amazon.  The price is right and I’ve had thousands of downloads worldwide.

The trick to selling books is having people come to your pages at the e-book stores.  If they’ve read my puns, I’ve reached my market: smart people with a sense of humor who are trying to understand the world.  I believe there is a market for every writer.  Among the billions in the world, you can find 1000 readers who appreciate what you write.  I’ve found readers in Australia, Wales, Ireland, Canada, and everywhere else English is spoken.

Readers read series, and everyone tries to come up with a character that can be used again and again.  This isn’t anything new, of course.  For example, Sherlock Holmes.  To attract readers, I make the first of a series the cheapest, often free, at least for a while.  A whole network on the internet exists to spotlight free books.  Google my name for examples.  Every time a free book is mentioned on one of these sites, I get multiple hits on my pages at the e-book stores.

Another thing about free books is that they get multiple reviews.  Readers seem to really like my books or to really hate my books.  It’s important to keep a good attitude about this.  Even the worst reviews can be helpful.  My first long review was from a lady in New Zealand.  I couldn’t believe anyone would actually sit down and review, at length, what I’d written.  Even though she only gave me two stars, she had some valuable things to say.  I’ m trying to write books that are read, and any feedback can be useful.

Knowing what you know now, would you still indie publish your e-books?

Self-publishing has been a wonderful experience for me.  It’s totally unique.  When else in history has a writer had a world market?  Never and never one where you can reach a reader in his own home.  I feel like I have a connection with people I would surely never meet in life.  I’m not going to make a lot of money in self-publishing, but really, only a few people make money in any of the arts.  There may be 25 stars in Hollywood, a few hundred who do supporting roles, then there is the rest: the travelling stock companies and unpaid weekend actors.  It’s like that in writing too.  A few stars, and the rest of us.  Even the stars aren’t going to be read in a generation.  Not to be depressing, but only a tiny number of books that are published are read in the following century.  I always get a kick out of the old movies based on a then current best seller no one has ever heard of today.

It’s better to be out in the world and doing your best.

Bio

Leon Shure has published four mysteries, all taking place in the wealthy and diverse North Shore suburbs of Chicago. These are “Fatal Sisters,” “The Baba Yaga, a Dr. Adam Karl Mystery,” and “Screams and Bleeds, a Vanek Mystery,” and “The Search for Hanson Sted, a Cal Hodges Mystery,” Another of his books, a free collection of his Twitter tweets “#Conversationstopers: Puns, Non Sequitur, Impossible Scenarios” became a ebook best seller, with almost 10,000 downloads and a second collection of his #Conversationstoppers has been published. A new series, the Kate Wehring Mysteries, will be published this summer, starting with two books.

Shure is a life-long resident of the Chicago area, and has lived both in the city and in the North and Northwest suburbs. A bachelors and masters graduate of Northwestern University’s Medill School of Journalism, Shure worked for the Lerner Newspapers (a chain of weeklies in the city); the Day Newspapers, a suburban daily newspaper chain owned by Field Enterprises, now the Chicago Sun-Times;, and Paddock Publications, a chain of daily newspapers in the Northwest suburbs, where he worked as a police reporter. He received the Jacob Sher Award for Outstanding Investigative Reporting.

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Excerpt

I could not see the malevolence in his face.

My “seeing eye woman” flung her body against my side, knocking both of us to the cold airport terminal floor.  I instinctively struggled to rise.  Kayko recovered faster, fell off me, sat up and, straight armed, used all the weight she could leverage to push me back down.  “Just stay there!” she whispered.

An explosive discharge echoed off the sides of the airport walls.  I heard robotic outbursts I could not interpret.

The gunman turned and ran, pushed hard against a non-automatic door, exited into daylight and kept running.  Men in blue shirts, running just as hard, banged the door against its casings as they rushed to follow.

I looked behind me to see if anyone was hurt.  I saw only blank faces, but no one was on the ground.  Security guards from the nearby gates surrounded us, lifted us to our feet, held us by our elbows and pulled us towards an office about 50 feet away.  “Stay here until you are debriefed,” one guard said and closed the door.

You can purchase Leon’s books via:

Smashword

Amazon

Barnes and Noble

You can find Leon online at:

Facebook, Leon Shure Author Page

Twitter

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Reblog: JM McDowell’s Revision Molasses

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Today, I thought I’d share one of my favorite blog posts by JM McDowell, where she talks about her recent revision battles. It’s an inspiring post and I hope you enjoy it!

http://jmmcdowell.com/2012/11/17/either-im-getting-stronger-or-the-molasses-is-getting-thinner/#more-3870

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Reblog: CreateSpace Q&A

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I’d like to refer you back to my amazing Q&A  with Audrey Kalman about CreateSpace from last week. It was a long post, so I figured it count as 3 blog posts. Hope you enjoy it! I’ve closed comments on this post so you can focus on that one. 🙂

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Things I Always Wanted to Know About CreateSpace: A Q&A with Audrey Kalman

The fabulous Audrey Kalman, who blogs at Audrey Kalman: Writing of Many Kinds, offered to do a Q&A with me about her experiences with CreateSpace because I’m seriously considering self-publishing my book this spring. Right now, I’m in the research phase and I am so very grateful to Ms. Kalman for sharing her insight and experience with us.

Today’s post is going to be on the long side because, well, I had a lot of questions and she gives great answers. I won’t be posting anything new on Friday or Monday, just linking back to this post because I think it’s that important. All my questions and comments will appear in bold to show how much work Ms. Kalman did for this post. 🙂

1)   What other competitors did you consider? Why did you choose CreateSpace over them?

I’m afraid to say I probably didn’t do as much research into alternatives as I should have. Since I published first for Kindle, I was already familiar with Amazon. For digital publishing, I had looked at Untreed Reads, but they weren’t then (and aren’t now) accepting unagented novels.

I know there’s a lot of fear and anxiety over Amazon. But there’s a reason people are afraid: the company is very good at what it does. Since I knew I wouldn’t have a lot of time and energy to put into the process, I wanted to go with a company that had an easy interface and lots of tools for helping self-published authors promote themselves. Of course, the author still must do all the work. I really liked the tools they have for estimating author royalties on different price points so you can see in advance the impact of making a change.

2)  What were the hardest parts to creating your book with CreateSpace? What was the easiest thing about using CreateSpace?

The hardest thing—and this may sound silly—was trying to figure out what to do about the ISBN. Of course, this would have been an issue with any self-publishing option.

I read a helpful FAQ (http://www.isbn.org/standards/home/isbn/us/isbnqa.asp) but that still didn’t tell me whatshould do. Should I get the ISBN myself or through Amazon? Should I buy a bundle of numbers to use for future works? In the end, I again ceded control and got the ISBN through CreateSpace, which turned out to be one of the easiest parts of the process.

3)   How did you go about choosing a font? Designing your cover? Converting the file for an e-reader? Any outside resources you would recommend to someone making these choices?

Once I had committed to using CreateSpace, I took advantage of their templates. I picked one with a font I liked and went with that. I figured that there was less chance of problems if I didn’t mess around with the template.

For the cover, I took photographs and had my son (who is into digital art) create the cover. This is one area I would spend more time and though on next time around. (In fact, I’m considering relaunching the book with a new cover.) My existing cover is hard to read in small format and doesn’t stand out well among hundreds of other thumbnails.

If you want to work with someone professionally, I just saw that Amazon has partnered with CrowdSpring to offer cover design services: http://www.crowdspring.com/createspace/book. I might look into something like that for next time.

Because I published first for Kindle, I did a fair amount of research to find out how to prep the manuscript for the Kindle version. I used MobiPocket creator: http://www.mobipocket.com/en/downloadsoft/productdetailscreator.asp. This was a great web resource: http://www.dragosroua.com/how-to-self-publish-on-amazon-kindle-and-ibookstore.

Since the time I published in 2011, Amazon has come out with a CreateSpace solution for Kindle publishing. I haven’t tried it, but if the CreateSpace on-demand solution is any indication, it should be pretty straightforward.

4) Were you happy with how your paperback book turned out? Did it meet your expectations?

We’ve all heard the adage “you get what you pay for.” I find myself amazed that anyone can print a book on demand for the amount I pay Amazon to do so. Given that, I’m not surprised that the cover is a bit flimsy and you don’t have a choice of cover stock. I (and many other authors!) think CreateSpace should offer a choice of cover stock. I’d be willing to pay a bit more for a sturdier (and not glossy) cover. That said, a good design can overcome the limitations of cover stock.

The cover probably gave me the most trouble of any part of the process. I had to have a graphic designer friend format the image and it took multiple tries to get the right resolution. The spine colors also were limited, so I ended up with one that doesn’t quite match the color of the front and back covers. I believe it’s possible to create a wraparound cover, but that seemed beyond my capabilities. Again, another reason why I would use some professional cover design help next time around.

5)   What were the top three biggest time sucks (expected or unexpected) to creating your book on CreateSpace?

1) Doing all the detail oriented research required so I wouldn’t make a big, unfixable mistake (for example, with the ISBN).

2) Proofreading. I expected this, and it would be the same with any publishing option.

3) Creating and uploading the cover.

Overall, the process was pretty quick. Here’s the schedule I used for myself.

Activity Time needed Target date
Decide on/obtain ISBN (free option chosen) 1 day 09/16/09
Format document 3 days 09/18/09
Write back cover copy 2 days 09/20/11
Create art for cover 2 days 09/20/09
Proofread document 1 day 09/19/09
Have proofreader proof document 1 day 09/20/11
Finish steps and submit for approval 1 day 09/21/09
Receive Amazon approval 2 days 09/22/09
Order and receive proof 5 days 09/28/09
Approve for sale 1 day 09/30/09
IF 2nd proof needed: Order and receive 5 days 09/29/09
IF 2nd proof needed: Approve for sale 1 day 10/05/09

6)   Did you find having a physical book was helpful/worth the cost or would you go the e-book only route next time?

Absolutely. It has enabled me to do readings where I can offer books for sale. I also have reached some people who (still) don’t use e-readers.

I look at the physical book as a marketing tool. Given the extremely low cost of using CreateSpace (less than $100 total to get set up, with a low per-book cost), I would certainly opt to have a printed copy available again.

7) Percentage wise, how did the e-book sales compare to the paperback book sales?

I sold about ¾ as many e-books as I did paperbacks. (But we’re not talking huge numbers here.) I believe both are important; physical copies for the reasons listed above, and virtual copies to appeal to people with e-readers and to take advantage of things like book giveaways on Goodreads and free Kindle downloads to increase name recognition.

8)  Did you find the distribution of your book was in line with your expectations? Was it as accessible as you expected?

Yes, given that my expectations were extremely modest. I considered this project a way to 1) make the book available to family and friends; and 2) learn about self-publishing.

Accessibility has not been an issue. Amazon offers two distribution options, regular or expanded, with expanded available for a modest fee of $25. (https://www.createspace.com/Products/Book/ExpandedDistribution.jsp). I chose expanded distribution, which allows the book to be available to libraries and bookstores through book distributors such as Ingram.

9)   Did you use CreateSpace for editorial services or engage an outside editor or a critique partner? If you used CreateSpace, were you satisfied with their work?

For Dance of Souls, I had a single reader giving me feedback. For my current novel, I am spending more time on the editing process and using a group of beta readers. I didn’t use CreateSpace professional services.

10)   What were the biggest pros and cons of using CreateSpace? If you could go back in time and give yourself a couple tips to using CreateSpace, what would they be?

Pros: Easy user interface, lots of tools, straightforward process.

Cons: It’s easy to get sucked into relying on a single vendor.

11)  Would you use them again, if you chose to go the indie route on your next book?

The answer is “yes, and.”  I would likely use CreateSpace AND set up on other platforms as well. Jane Friedman has an excellent post on questions to ask before choosing an e-publishing solution: http://janefriedman.com/2012/02/10/10-questions-epublishing, which any author would do well to review.

Thanks for the opportunity to talk about the process… I hope it was helpful!

 Audrey, it was extremely helpful for me and I hope my blog readers enjoyed it as much as I did! I really loved the timetable you created and shared. Gave me a good idea of how long this process would take. Now I’d like to hear a bit more about you and your book. 

BIO:

Audrey Kalman has been writing professionally for more than 30 years. She published newspaper and magazine articles in the days when such things still involved ink on paper, wrote a database how-to book when such things were popular, and now offers writing and editing services as a consultant. In 2011 she published Dance of Souls, a literary novel that explores the longing we all share to find meaning in our lives and the countless ways we search for it. She launched a writing blog, “Writing of Many Kinds,” at http://audreykalman.wordpress.com and maintains a Facebook page for her novel at www.facebook.com/Danceofsouls.

Excerpt from Dance of Souls:

It was a dream, of course, although Zach couldn’t remember ever having dreamed so vividly. It seemed so real: The vibrant orange flames, hissing, cracking, racing along the wall between the hallway and the kitchen; the smell, like the time he and Brendan had experimented with setting one of Brendan’s sister’s dolls on fire; the heat like pressure against his body. It’s the dope making it seem so real ran through his head. I’m not used to smoking weed. Wish I hadn’t. Then he sat up, banged his head on the edge of the coffee table where the remains of dinner still lay, white cardboard containers upended and bleeding greasy sauce onto the table’s tile surface.

Dance of Souls is available as a

PAPERBACK through CreateSpace (you pay the same, better deal for the author) — $13.99 plus shipping

PAPERBACK through Amazon — $13.99 plus shipping or free shipping for Prime members

KINDLE version through Amazon — $2.99 (watch for free promotion days)

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Grandma H Moments

I’ve been going through a rough patch with my writing. I really started to feel like all these agent rejections left me facing a dead-end road. So I’ve been down the past few weeks. Grandma H picked me up for our outing two weeks ago and my mom cautioned her to be careful because I’ve been feeling low.

So Grandma H tries to be upbeat about my writing and be supportive. She talks about how much I’ve accomplished.

I start to laugh and say, “You know every time I’m optimistic about my writing, you piss all over it.”

She replies, “I don’t mean to. Do I really do that?”

I say, “Yeah, you piss on it.”

She confides, “I really don’t mean to piss on it. That’s terrible that I piss on it. I won’t piss on it.”

After she works piss into three sentences in a row, I can’t help laughing.

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Grandma H goes to the doctor for a rash on her face. He gives her some cream and tells her it’s rosacea. He warns that stress will make it worse.

Grandma H comes home and announces, “I have wastoria.” She then taps her nose to show us where it is.

“You have what?”

“Wastoria. It’s this red rash on my nose and cheeks.”

I ask, “You mean rosacea?”

“What?”

“Rosacea.”

“Yes, rastoria.”

When my uncle comes in the room she says, “Don’t stress me out or my rastoria will get worse.” She taps her nose again.

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What I’m Thankful For…

After stuffing myself with Thanksgiving food, it’s time to reflect. To think. To ponder.

Actually, I can’t move. So it’s the perfect time to pause and be thankful for the wonderful people and things in my life.

I’m thankful to:

  • my parents who believe in me when I don’t–you’re always proud, even when I’m not making six figures and living in your living room.
  • my friends who prop me up when the world knocks me down–all those texts matter.
  • my blog buddies who cheer me on and commiserate with me–your support has helped me through so many writing gullies.
  • my crit partner and best writing buddy–you make me a better writer & person.
  • my Grandma H–she somehow makes me laugh on a weekly basis.
  • my dog who loves me when I’m sick and stinky–that’s unconditional love

I’m also thankful that I know what I love to do and I can do it. Sitting at the computer revising for 6 hours made me feel good this week. Because I enjoy it. I love it.

And the accomplishment I feel from improving a scene is almost as good as a bonus check.

I’m thankful that Dr. Bitan fixed my spine so that I can sit and type without crippling pain.

I’m thankful to all the teachers who invested in me, who gave of themselves and made me smarter than any book alone could.

I’m thankful that I live in one of the freest countries in the world, where I can do anything I put my mind to.

I hope everyone had a terrific Turkey day and survives Black Friday shopping!

Many Thanks!

K

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The Next Big Thing

Big thanks to Victoria of Victoria Writes and Pete Denton for deeming me worthy of The Next Big Thing tag!

In order to participate, I must answer some questions about my manuscript and pass it along to five other bloggers.

So here goes…

What is the title of your Work in Progress?

The Six Train to Wisconsin
Where did the idea come from for the book?
I was cleaning my toilet when the idea of how hard it must be to be married to a suicidal telepath popped into my head.
What genre does your book fall under?
Literary fiction with a commercial bent or fantasy with literary flare.
Which actors would you choose to play your characters in a movie rendition?
Two absolute unknowns to play the wife and the husband.

What is a one-sentence synopsis of the book?

To save her life and her sanity, Oliver brings his telepathic wife to the hometown he abandoned–an escape that threatens to reveal the secrets of his past.
Will your book be self-published or represented by an agency?
Ask me again in April. 🙂
How long did it take you to write the first draft of the manuscript?
I was working full time in NYC so drafting was in my spare time spread out over 1.5 years.
What other books would you compare this story to in your genre?
It’s in the vein of The Time Traveler’s Wife and Lovely Bones, a beautifully written book with a strong plot.
Who or what inspired you to write this book?
I wanted to write a love story that was real and messy.
What else about your book might pique the reader’s interest?
Have you ever had a discussion that spiraled into an argument with the person you love because you were having completely separate conversations and not realizing it? A Publisher’s Weekly reviewer called it an “emotionally intense, candid exploration of devotion, forgiveness, and acceptance.”
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I am now going to tag 5 bloggers. *Please don’t feel any pressure to participate.* But if you want to, I’d love to hear about your WIPs.
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Book Review: If Mashed Potatoes Could Dance

I just returned from my second trip to the quirky midwest town of Broken Rope, Missouri, in If Mashed Potatoes Could Dance. Paige Shelton‘s second book in the Country Cooking School Mystery series is a fast, fun read with a difficult double mystery to solve.

Betts and Grams are roped into hosting a busload of foodies for an impromptu cooking lesson and sleepover. All is going well, until two of the foodies go missing and one turns up dead with a broken rope around his neck. (BTW I had no idea who was behind the foodie murder and kidnapping until the very last pages of the book.)

Betts is plunged into this murder/kidnapping after her best friend, Jake, discovers the dead body.

But the problems of the present aren’t the only ones Betts faces.

The ghost of Sally Swarthmore, Broken Rope’s notorious ax murderer, entreats Betts and Grams to help her discover if she is guilty of killing her parents.

Sally is an intriguing character whose true story begs to be told. I’m a sucker for ghost stories and I love love love this element of Ms. Shelton’s mystery. You want to believe in Sally’s innocence despite her guilty verdict in life.

Betts and Jake are a crime solving duo I’d be thrilled to join. I love tagging along while they put the pieces together.

I’m dying to try the potato recipes in the back of the book too!

I can’t wait for book 3 to learn more about Betts’ abilities with ghosts and spend more time with the colorful characters of Broken Rope, Missouri!

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Book Review: Between Shades of Gray

Ruta Sepetys‘ first novel is a triumph in humanity. Between Shades of Gray is a must read for everyone.

In every age, there are books that challenge your world. Or at least, the world you believe exists. That force you to see the wrongs that were done and could be done again.

This book does that. And so much more.

This is a book where “one girl breaks the silence of history.”

The most horrible reality is forced upon Lina, a 15-year-old girl deported from  Lithuania to Siberia. She endures unspeakable brutalities.

Have you ever wondered what a human life is worth? That morning, my brother’s was worth a pocket watch.

The book sheds light on an era in history that is not well known. What Stalin did to to Eastern European nations after he invaded. His systematic deportation and mass genocide. The cruelties that the survivors dared not speak of for fear of being sent back to Siberia.

This is their book. And Ms. Sepetys awakens everyone to the horrors that tested their humanity.

One of the most beautiful and important books I will read in my life–that is how I would categorize Between Shares of Gray.

I hope to one day write a book of such value.

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Book Review: Second Sight

Second Sight: An Editor’s Talks on Writing & Revising & Publishing Books for Children and Young Adults was a book I picked up at the SCBWI Winter Conference in January after attending Cheryl Klein’s workshop on revision.

It took me a bit of time to get through it, but that’s because I took my time. I read 5-10 pages at a time and put it aside. I let my mind mull over what I read and how it impacted my manuscript.

Ms. Klein writes in a practical, user-friendly style. You feel like she is speaking directly to you as she guides you through:

  • what makes a good book,
  • the publisher relationship,
  • what a query letter should do,
  • character charts,
  • techniques for analyzing and revising,
  • getting to the heart of your emotional story, and
  • the quartet of plot, character, voice, & point.

I appreciated how she broke things down so that I could apply what she said to my own work. For example, when trying to get to the emotional heart of your story, there are four things to consider:

  1. Conflict, Mystery, or Lack: which model is your central plot and your subplots?
  2. What does the character want?
  3. Compulsion vs. Obstacles: The obstacles are the frontstory, but the compulsion is the backstory.
  4. Problem, Process, Solution: Each chapter should include a process step moving the story toward to the solution.

At the end of the book, she gives you 25 revision techniques and a final word on the author-editor relationship.

Definitely a book worth reading. And rereading.

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